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    dots Submission Name: Washeddots
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    Author: arkayye
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 69/109/51
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Sometimes the simplest of things we do in a day may change the way we think or feel..... sometimes :_)


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    A final click breaks the dense
    silence.
    From inside the searing metal tub
    emerges a once bright red garment
    its fabric faded, worn, and frayed.


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    Submitted on 2005-10-11 18:12:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I do believe that this is pure sex.

    Very nicely hidden in your washing metaphor, I see the sexual undertones of the whole thing.

    Absolutely brilliant!


    was it good for you?ery well done

    Be happy

    Graeme

    I like this, well thought out and v
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      very interesting. comparing the darker feelings in life to laundry. i have to agree, the little things in life can sometimes change the way we think. honestly, find laundry to be relaxing. that is, until it's done and then it's gotta be fold or hung and what not.
    -hybrid
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by hybridmagnolia | [ Reply to This ]
      now this i can relate to
    reading this poem i associated the washing machine with human life
    for some reason it fits perfectly
    this sis a credit to you for realizing that
    by the way thank you for commenting on my poems i really appreciate it
    writing for me is a release of all the feellings and energies ive had stuck in my mind for far too long
    i will be looking for more of your poems in the future
    please keep in touch as i believe we share a love of the world in commen
    Take Care Of Yourself
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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