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    dots Submission Name: back with a vengeance verse 2dots
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    Author: unknown soldier
    ASL Info:    17/kenner, La (N.O)
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 1348/1346/203
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 766
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsback with a vengeance verse 2dots
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    Come back flingin demons, Iíll devour your souls
    Sissies stay screaming, hiding in a cowardís hole
    Itís my world
    read the beware sign before you enter
    Cuz Iíll never crumble
    like the world trade centers
    Anonymous soldier
    that sucker punches stock holders
    Head harder than rock boulders
    Killa flow that can rewrite your constitution
    Kill me now before I spark this revolution
    People fear what they donít understand
    so they try to command
    And hold the world in the palm of their hands
    Control freaks, who seek to calm and console me
    Using me for selfish, dishonest ambitions
    No one pays attention
    gotta find someonewhoíll honestly listen
    Trapped all alone in worlds seen as parallel
    Round and round the world we go
    Gotta get off this carousel
    I have to step up
    so I can contend with the greatest
    Skillís lost
    How did I forget or misplace it
    Destroying poetry
    Before itís over, Iíll murder this art
    Itís sad, been going for years
    But it still ends where it starts

    that's why i'm back with a vengeance
    my task is to end this
    that's why you can't understand shit
    i'm young and i'm restless
    that's why you can't apprehend it
    i'll extract and subtract from your essence
    cuz i'm back with a vengeance
    (x2)




    Submitted on 2005-10-11 18:38:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow...I was hooked from the first two lines and it only got better...I'm running out of new comments..this one was some awesome [censored] though troy! You're chorus was awesome but I can't pick a favorite part in this one...there were so many lines that stuck out. This was a 5 for 5 my friend:)
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      ill always listen you know im hear for you boy. the chorus is some good [censored] my friend. yeah i spent like ten minutes tryin to find something to say that i havent already said yet and i cant think of anything so im a go now.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-10-17 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      so I can contend with the greatest
    Skillís lost
    How did I forget or misplace it
    Destroying poetry
    Before itís over, Iíll murder this art
    Itís sad, been going for years
    But it still ends where it starts

    thats my favorite lil' part of this verse...I gotta be honest, I've ran completely out of [censored] to say so I just picked 7 lines, but thats still my favorite and stuff I just needed those lines...and...suhhh...[censored]
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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