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    dots Submission Name: vampiredots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    19 Male Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 51/46/32
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 241
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    Bytes: 135



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       this is something that poped into my head just now .


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    read the new version in Vampires #2 please
    this poem has been moved I repeat that this poem has been moved !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




    Submitted on 2005-10-11 18:55:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know what this is supposed to be about. You're friends with vampires but your a werewolf, right?

    "The only person that wouldn't shun me is the other werewolf in my area"

    Very clever, yet strangely confusing. But good write. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-10-15 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      well, i will say that it confused me at first. the point gets across, but it seems forced. i think this may be more prose then poetry though.
    _Kat
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by PsychoBabble214 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm...it didn't seem as much as a poem as I thought it would be...but it was still good..I hope to read more from you, and see different genres Keep it up


    -Nichole-
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem makes me wonder about the real you. It keeps me at the edge of my seat wondering what you're secret might be. I too feel sometimes like a vampire, keeping secrets that i can't tell.
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]



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