very short yes but you were able to get the message out in these short words
The person you are writing to is very lucky I have read a couple of your poems and they all seem to deal with the same topic undying love There is nothing wrong with this as it shows how kind hearted of a person you are
Take Care Ron
And thank you for your recent comments hope to hear from you again
Well, I'm a minimalist, so the length is no problem with me, but it just doesn't say anything new (I'm sorry if that sounds harsh). Poetry can have ideas that have been expressed a thousand times and have a little twist that makes them unique (usually a new perspective or fresh imagery), Amy
Oh, that is a very sweet poem, I thought about just a single person in my life who means that much to me. Its very cute, its nice to say happy stuff on here, I wouldn't change a thing. Short and Very Sweet is always good.
Submission Name: Forever and a Day
