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    dots Submission Name: How Do I Tell You?dots
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    Author: Liminality
    ASL Info:    15/Male/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 8/13/6
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 302
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1089



    Description:
       A poem about how my relationship is with a friend, its hard, and half the time it seems that its more trouble then its worth. It seems that every action and word that i do and say hurts him, I don't mean it that way, but life's trickly like that. I'm sticking with it though, trying to work through everything.


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    dotsHow Do I Tell You?dots
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    How do you tell someone that you love them enough, to not be in their life?
    How do you tell someone that you care about so mush that you can’t be in their life?
    How do you tell someone that your love will bring them pain?
    How do you love someone enough to never see them again?

    Can you love someone “enough?”

    If only I could tell you that me being in your life will bring you more pain, sadness, misery, regret and torment than any human can bear.
    How do I tell you that because I love you, I can’t be with you?
    That being alone will bring you less pain, and hurt then being with me already has?

    I don’t know how to tell you these things.
    I just hope that I find a way to before it’s too late,
    I don’t want to be the death of you.

    How do I tell you that just the little glimmer of joy, happiness, or love that I might bring to your life is muffled, no strangled by the despair, sadness and pain just my frail presence brings?

    How can my love destroy your very soul?




    Submitted on 2005-10-11 20:53:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow
    thank god your a friend to this person

    we all have different personalities
    some of us feel that we may be helping someone by correcting them or something why others may go head on and get right to the point
    correct me if im wrong but i have a funny feeling this runs a little deeper
    be positive do not give up
    and most of all do not be afraid of your feelings
    you used the word love with a friend thats powerful
    Remain positive
    if you need someone to talk to just comment
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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