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    dots Submission Name: SATORI (The confrontation)dots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 77/145/85
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 198
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    Description:
       a breif glimpse back in time. we learn from the past by taking it into consideration. life is a combination of that and thinking ahead. using what we've learned from the past to make sure we run don't re-enact mistakes.


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    dotsSATORI (The confrontation)dots
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    New enlightenments harmonize my mind and bodies actions,
    so rest your cherry red lips, there's no need for explanations.
    I've felt his energy radiating from deep within your skin,

    I've seen you come, and go from his appartment in town.
    I'm shivering harder now, and you still haven't made a sound...

    Do you realize i've been waiting inside this bleak room since sun down?
    Who the fuck is he? The one you were with. Was it him again?
    I bought you that fucking dress, were you trying to impress him?

    My everything was into this for the mutual role of an actress..?
    All that's left is myself, life to be lived and the passion repossessed...




    Submitted on 2005-10-11 20:56:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I bought you that [censored] dress, were you trying to impress him?, this is my fav. line! The poem is very emotional, but this line made me laugh. Don't get me wrong, its a great line. But Just the notion of a girl wearing a dress another man bought her to see someone else is hilarious and sad. I gotta go read your other poems now.
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      Such passion, this comes deep from the heart. It totally drew me in. Love has many pit falls and this one is written beautifully.

    Crackwalker
    | Posted on 2005-10-11 00:00:00 | by Crackwalker | [ Reply to This ]



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