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    dots Submission Name: highschool helldots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       boredom+math class=extreme boredom+x=this


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    dotshighschool helldots
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    all the strange yet depressingly familiar faces
    asking questions
    exchaging hellos like birthday presents
    each more extravagant than the next
    am i really so weird
    because i dont join in on this ritual?
    sorry...
    oh wait no im not
    because although each hello is warapped up nicely
    theres nothing inside
    did you really miss me
    or was that for posterity?
    let me guess
    you forgot to call
    all these liars.. backstabbers...extortionists..
    i guess this is highschool




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 09:31:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yep, I hate it when everyone you didn’t even talk to is like “HI I MISSED YOU!”. It’s [censored] annoying…like they know you. It’s not high school, just fake people doing what their fake mommies and daddies do…just to do the polite thing, instead of actually caring….
    | Posted on 2006-07-18 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, come on high school is not that bad. I mean yeah some of the people arent very sincere, but it's okay. well... anywayz this was okay. I dont know, I didnt really like the format all that much. but I guess in an over all aspect it okay, it wasnt bad, but it didnt really blow me away.
    | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]
      ok this kind of wraps up highschool in a nutshell, you say hello and prentend to be friendly with all of these people but after graduation you never see any of them again, at least thats how it was in my experience, i liked good job
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Lost My Love 4ever | [ Reply to This ]


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