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    dots Submission Name: Stupid Questionsdots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsStupid Questionsdots
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    "How can you still love him?" they ask,
    "After all that he's put you through?"
    She just smiles, a sad, wise smile.
    "It's something I'm compelled to do."

    "How could you let him hold onto your heart,"
    "Knowing the games that he plays?"
    She just shrugs, her shoulders slumped,
    "Maybe it's just a phase."

    "Why do you keep on letting him
    Do these things that he does to you?"
    She laughs, a twinkle in her blue eyes,
    "I've got nothing better to do."

    "Why won't you just give it up?"
    "Why can't you let go?"
    A solitary tear courses down her cheek,
    "I don't really know."

    "Why do you still love me?" he asks,
    "With all that I've done to you?"
    "We forgive to the extent we love," she replys,
    "I could forgive anything you could do."




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 10:01:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow..thats..so..me. It really reminds me of my boyfriends and my current relationship. We did something really [censored]ty to me lately, but I still managed to forgive him and take him back. Oh, and in respose to your title (sorry, I just HAVE to say this) "There are no such things are Stupid Questions, just Stupid people who ask them"
    ~Kat
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww i think this is really cute.. sad, but cute. So innocent, and just.. full of love and forgiveness, despite how undeserving the other person is. It reminds me of alot of my friends who have been like this, going back to their boyfriends when they've treated them badly, and just falling for them every time. I never really understood till i met my boyfriend, but luckily he treats me right..
    anyway, all i can say is as HARRRRDd as it is, because i know its like the worst thing in the world to be without them, you can't settle for less. You deserve nothing but the best, and if your not getting it from him.. you don't necessarily have to move on (not yet atleast) just dont let him keep hurting you. :)
    good luck.
    good write tho 4sure, haha.. its a differnet approach
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Lova_Star | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this poem, especially the last two lines because i think that is a very true statement and i've never thought of it that way. great write; great idea; i thoroughly enjoyed it! have a great day!

    ~smlaw
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by smlaw | [ Reply to This ]


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