You write with such an experienced pen. This is one of many I really seemed to like. Your words are so powerfu and yet beautiful which can be kind of a challenge in it's self. I love the way your writing gives the feeling of experience. Sometimes there can be lack of emotion in great lines but you seemed to have been in this situation and wrote this from your heart.
I would really appreciate it if you critique a few peices of my work, but please be easy on "WRITERS MUST WRITE."
This is a lovely poem with a wonderful style you have here. I really enjoyed the brilliant imagery and your descriptive words really bring this one to life. I love the rhyme scheme here as well, very cleverly done. I read your description and said Ahhh...two of my favorite things, the sunset and a glass of wine...I just knew I couldnt go wrong with this one and sure enough I was right. A beautifully written nature poem. Lovely! Take care.