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    dots Submission Name: The Season of Leavingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 598
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 884



    Description:
       Just one of those out-of-nowhere pieces that flowed out watching an Autumn sunset and sipping a glass of wine.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif


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    dotsThe Season of Leavingdots
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    The Season of Leaving
    A Cyclical Tale
    Summer is Grieving
    Visiting Autumn Gale
    Whispering Winter Thieving
    Puts Spring in Bare Jail

    The Season of Sowing
    A Divine Stage
    Coming, Living, Going
    Love Inherent Not Rage
    Soul of Goal Growing
    Living Life Stage
    Does A Garden Need Hoeing
    "IT" Continues ~ Turn the Page

    The Season of Growing
    A Bright & Shining Light
    Brooks Flowing, Breezes Blowing
    Painted Hues of Night
    Colors Variegated Showing
    Feeling Taking Flight

    The Seasons of Dying
    No Particular Sound
    "IT" Counts ~ Trying
    All Lost is Found
    Society Needs Buying
    Why Are the People Bound
    While Mother Nature's Crying
    Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Ground




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 10:38:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I figured that if Frank M. likes it, it must be good. I liked it. It had a nice rythm and pretty words. All, of course, wrapped inside a package of perfect rhyme scheme.
    The Conqueror
    | Posted on 2006-02-10 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]
      You write with such an experienced pen. This is one of many I really seemed to like. Your words are so powerfu and yet beautiful which can be kind of a challenge in it's self. I love the way your writing gives the feeling of experience. Sometimes there can be lack of emotion in great lines but you seemed to have been in this situation and wrote this from your heart.

    great job

    I would really appreciate it if you critique a few peices of my work, but please be easy on "WRITERS MUST WRITE."

    l.l.collins
    | Posted on 2005-11-26 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]
      That was ssoooo cool. I really liked your ryme pattern. ummm... I cant really think of anything else to say. *Im speechless* (a very hard thing to do). Good job!
    | Posted on 2005-10-25 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely poem with a wonderful style you have here. I really enjoyed the brilliant imagery and your descriptive words really bring this one to life. I love the rhyme scheme here as well, very cleverly done. I read your description and said Ahhh...two of my favorite things, the sunset and a glass of wine...I just knew I couldnt go wrong with this one and sure enough I was right. A beautifully written nature poem. Lovely! Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiffalicious, how the hell did I miss this one?

    Simply brilliant! And in a wonderful rhyme!!!

    It lends itself to be spoken aloud, with the inflections and accents that do it proper justice.

    Brilliant work, Tiff, I'm glad you noticed I hadn't been here...I must be more careful in future!

    Eleventeen stars for this one *************

    Ne Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      What lovely words and it ALL rhymed ! It took me on a little whirlwind journey around the seasons and I felt I waas actually walking through them all. Superb.
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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