Description: I've been having problems with my son's father and although after years I know what I should say and what I shouldn't take but he starts in & I feel like a belittled child and dreams are only for crushing with sharp angry teeth and words that sting me into emotional distress.
And sooner now, I stop and I check myself and I remember that I am here and he is there and I don't have to feel so small for to get here I was very strong.
Don't ever let ANYONE or ANYTHING make you feel your dreams and hopes are nothing ~ make them your reality
The people of the world should unite and pass a law that ALL dreams will come true. And while they are at it - pass another law outlawing lies, evil and poverty. Your poem was as usual - very inspirational and very good.
Ummmm short lines... I like the line breaks and I'm almost always a sucker for short lines, so I was biased bfore I read this piece. bonus points for using the word allegorical in a poem. the last line upset me bit, but it could just have been that i was enjoying a nice metaphoric ride and you said reality now and there was. Bit of a buzz kill. 4 outta 5