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    dots Submission Name: Immramdots
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    Author: aghori
    ASL Info:    30 M Nv
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 45/56/18
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 156
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 565



    Description:
       In an attempt to generte a theme, another quasi religious poem. This one is about the Souls journey of death and rebirth in Celtic mtyhological cycles.


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    dotsImmramdots
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    I am descended from heaven
    on the rays of the sun
    I am an Oak
    I am an Acorn
    I am a Salmon
    the thumb of Finn
    pressed against lips and tongue
    possessing all knowledge
    I am the second between
    the ages of heroes
    existing but not recorded
    in this place
    between places
    perfectly manifest
    I am an Eagle
    I am an Arrow
    I am Decay
    passing through time
    like a river
    I touch all things
    and ascend to heaven
    on the rays of the sun




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 16:34:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this poem! I like anything that's Celtic and this just added to my list, thanx for a great uplifting read - keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellant, a different and refreshing piece. I loved the theme and the simple metaphorical style. I truly enjoyed reading this.

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    ben
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      Very cool, I like it. it didn't rhyme but then again it did, you know...it flowed, that's the word. Could you please check out some of my works becuase if people don't review, I can't write, and I need to write some more! But anyway, I've been posting this on every comment I do, so great job, and keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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