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Author: angel_eyes9701
ASL Info:    24 F Salem, OR
Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 19 /33 /14
Words: 85
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Fiance is still doubting us, so I am still expressing how I feel. Not so much doubting us, cause he knows that we love each other, he is just scared. He's being shipped out for the Army and is afraid that I won't be here when I return.


Quit asking if I love you
Doubting, when I try
Quit looking for the answer
When neither one of us knows why

Escape into my kisses
Wrap me in your arms
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
Never bring me harm

Dream away the sorrow
Smile for today
Allow the child inside you
to giggle, laugh and play

Do believe I love you
Look into my eyes
For there you'll find
the truth between us...
Never any lies

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