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    dots Submission Name: Only Friendsdots
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    Author: miss__smiles
    ASL Info:    16/f/Soo, Ont
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 117/110/20
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 847
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 832



    Description:
       Well, I'm on the other side again! Go figure! Actually, I was listening to "Jesse's Girl" by Rick Springfield, and wanted to write a similar piece.


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    dotsOnly Friendsdots
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    Best friends since we were young
    Never anything more
    But my feelings have now changed
    I don't know what's in store.

    I saw you watching her from afar
    Then watched you take your shot
    It made me feel broken inside
    A feeling I've never got.

    At first I didn't see the signs
    I just thought I was blind
    But now I see I love you,
    Now that you've left me behind.

    You tell me you'll always be there
    You tell me that you care for me
    You see us as best friends
    And that's all we'll ever be.

    But I want more than friendship now
    I want to hold you close to me
    But you love her, we're only friends
    And that's all we'll ever be.




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 21:39:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is good have been there myself alot lately. I sucks doesnt it then of course you can;t be friends cuz the new giirl doesnt like you. very good write but don;t keep you love to yourself take a chance and maybe tell him couldnt hurt worse then you do already rite?
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by suzanne | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is light-weight down hearting. This poem makes me think of how bad it is when you fall in love with your best friend since you all were young.
    All I have to say is that you just need to keep writing cause this was a great piece and I hope that you find someone to love you as you have loved them even if it takes a while because as the saying goes true love is hard to find we all have to deal with that problem.
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww this is a sad poem, it made me want to cry. (i didnt) i really like the ending...that really got me cuz ive been throught this before...really great, keep writing

    <3 adalae
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww this is a really sweet poem, it's really sad when you fall in love with someone but he or she only wants to be friends... but I look at it this way, it's better to have him/her as a friend than not to have him/her at all!
    | Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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