I really liked this and think that many people feel this way about different people throughout their lives...it strongly reminds me of my exhusband actually and the feelings he expresses to me...you captured it nicely...and simple can be simply perfect..well done...stormy
Tyler, I enjoyed reading your poem. In your next one I'd go in to more detail. I think you are ready for the next level, really. In this poem ,the words are simple. I felt calm after reading it. I knew your emotions through out the whole poem. That is a good thing and a bad thing. I want to be able to think about a poem when I read it. I think you poem gives the meaning out on a silver platter. If you are fine with that I'm fine with it. It seems very common to me. Who is this poem to?
very good write. the one thing that i like most about this poem is that you never specify the relationship between the two people. it could be a relative that died, a friendship lost, or even a love lost. this quality really makes it a piece that can be related to universally. i pleasure to read!
a very deep and personal write i can relate because i for instance havent seen the woman i love more than anything my mother in 7 years not a day goes by that i dont think of her i am planning a trip this november to the eat coast to see her i hope you find her or him again and are able to heal a wounded heart