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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: withblindedeyez
    ASL Info:    19/m/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 83/121/58
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 267
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1373



    Description:
       i wrote this song and it sounds better when its played on Guitar and when its sang, but i decide to put it up here.


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    dotsLifedots
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    I open my eye’s, trying to see,
    What this life was meant to be
    I feel trapped in a lie of a life
    Standing in front of the mirror to see
    What was meant to be me, instead I see
    A broken vision of the life I lead.

    This life,
    Its not worth fighting for
    No its not worth dying for
    So I wave goodbye to my life
    And watch it fall away from me
    This life is not worth living anymore.

    Mistakes plague my past
    I hide behind this mask
    Afraid to step into the light
    Scared to fight this fight,
    I’ve felt the knife, pressed to
    My skin, emotions telling me
    I can’t win, this game called life.

    This life,
    Its not worth fighting for
    No its not worth dying for
    So I wave goodbye to my life
    And watch it fall away from me
    This life is not worth living anymore.

    I can’t recall when this happen to me
    Everything’s disappearing like a cut
    Up memory, this can’t be the life I
    Was suppose to lead, cause it’s nothing
    Like what I wanted it to be.

    This life,
    Its not worth fighting for
    No its not worth dying for
    So I wave goodbye to my life
    And watch it fall away from me
    This life is not worth living anymore.




    Submitted on 2005-10-12 22:10:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this piece. i bet it does sound better when played cuz i couldn't keep a tune for me to sing this with. i actually couldn't find a tune to sing this to. good job.
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Since this is a song, I "tried" to sing it with my own tune. (you would not want to hear me!) It's great. Sometimes life can feel like that. But whenever I feel depressed, I tell myself it coud be worse, and something good will happen soon! If you can read my poem "daekness" and comment on it. Anything else you want to read too, jst go ahead!
    Much love
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really good. I would love to hear it dang I bet it makes a really good song. The writing was great. Great write.

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]



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