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    dots Submission Name: Crunch Wrap Supremedots
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    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 403
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 769



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       I love the crunch Wrap Supreme. Please give me comments and let me know what you think of my poem.
    And try reading my ode to taco bell.


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    dotsCrunch Wrap Supremedots
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    Last Night I had a dream,
    I dreamt of the Crunch Wrap Supreme.
    Oh heaven what tis this, tis this true,
    That human hands have created you.

    Nay I say, this cannot be real,
    Because to eat you is an unworldly thrill.
    Your softness, your crunch, your nacho cheese,
    You do this all simply to please.

    Oh Crunch my love for you will never fade,
    And I shalt buy thee once I am paid.
    Oh that I may bask in thy radiant light,
    Yes, thus to protect thy name I would fight.

    i fear not demons, or beasts of hell,
    For I have embraced thy goodness at Taco Bell.
    So in this moment to the Bell I shalt run,
    To once again think outside the bun.





    Submitted on 2005-10-13 02:00:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sweet is all i have to say about that! My favorite part is the second paragraph with the cheese. Good write and keep it up. Thanks so much for the laugh.
    | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      AAHHAHAHA, this was amazing. i'm also inlove/addicted what ever you wanna call it to cheesey gordita crunches, i've been since the first time they came out. i actually just finished one, wow how ironic. haha very glad to have run across this, take it easy and thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by Cannablisjunkie | [ Reply to This ]



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