This poem is so very true! Wow! Such powerfull words and message in this writing!
I really enjoyed it and it made me think, about how I always tryed to fit in,
And felt I couldn't be myself.Now I am learning to be myself and if people can accept me for who I am then they are not worth the trouble.
The flow was a little notched probably because the format didnt really help the piece was the message was strong and true, people should be able to relate to at least on instance in this piece and should follow it's message. Good job on that. Revise it a little and it could become a more powerful piece.
yeah it coulda flowed better, but the message shines through like a beacon that guides those searching for their identity back to themselves. i hate it when people pretend to be something else just to fit in or feel special. if a ''friend" doesn't like u for who u are, then they're not a friend.
I agree with disturbex1000. People do judge by what they see. I do think it could have flowed better. Maybe different words? I'm not sure. I have a similar poem: Precious Mask, read it when you can, and tell me what u think of it. Thanxxx