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    dots Submission Name: corporate can-can of affairsdots
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    Author: kma12790
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 28/41/18
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       affiars....though they look so passionate and beautiful on "sex in the city" are the worst form of betrayal. These men dance around hotel rooms and that were paid for with motives that can ruin lives. The smug grins of these smiling men have the habit of decomposing before your very eyes along with other important things like morals and loyalty.


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    power suits and influence
    power wasted on insolence
    out-of-town buisness conference
    do hotel beds make you lose your conscience

    strip bar veteran at 55
    a wife and two kids back on lovers drive
    think "i still got it" as you throw her on the bed
    what about that "i love you daddy" that johnny said

    "such a family man" say the neighbors at home
    they pay in naivety and pray for their own
    does it hurt you to hear that "Welcome home"
    except your mind is on the intern you want to bone

    strictly buisness it used to be
    until you found your title would make them bend to knee
    no pretty face could resist your charm
    too bad it was bought and did nothing but harm




    Submitted on 2005-10-13 17:22:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this has depth definetly, I liked how you kept with the mood. It seemed like so much fun to read because it was like a story kinda. A funny one in a way.

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    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      Powerfull stuff. your take on the issue is very direct and good. And of course you are right - affairs are an ugly side of relationships and only cause hurt and heartbreak in the end. A very good write.
    | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow that was different. Very well put for those men of affairs. I was a wife of one of those kind of men. Till I divorced his ass. Very good write. Thanks for sharing with us . Keep up the good work. God bless
    | Posted on 2005-10-13 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]


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