My Dream
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This truly is my dream. Tolkien- yup, all credits to him. The Hobbit and The lord of the rings---- they inspired me to write this poem. I hope everyone of you like it.
My Dream
Of meadows afar Of People queer Of languages unknown -I dream Of caverns deep Of civilizations wise Of rivers swift And of trees evergreen -I dream Of elegant princesses Of clever creatures Of times adventurous Of journeys endless -I dream I shall travel to quench my thirst and fulfill -my dream Till my very last days, i shall travel on until every thing I have seen! |
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beautiful....beautiful....beautiful....just like your eyes are...no...actually nothing can compete with your eyes...but this poem's beautiful nonetheless| | Posted on 2007-12-18 00:00:00 | by N0shin | [ Reply to This ] | I like the flow and the theme you had. As people, we tend to stay stuck in our own little worlds. Never to venture out into the world. Very good :) | Ciao, }i{Renae}i{ | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by Poetic_tragedy6 | [ Reply to This ] | That's an interesting thing to get inspiration from, but it's outcome was good so who cares. I like the true feelings put into this poem. A lot of other people are just writing the same old depressing things. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for a great read. | ~bianca | Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by bmc | [ Reply to This ] | This is brilliant. It had a great flow and I liked the wording and -I dream | it describes most of the things I dream of too. *claps* Good work inkpen | Posted on 2006-02-02 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ] | This is incredible, obaid. I'm really liking your work...so much thought and emotion...and we all at some point have dream like that, to see the land of Tolkein...lol.. | Keep it up! *darkwinged* | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ] | WOw, I can really relate to this. I mean, I can understand what your saying clearly and you know I also think this way sometimes. Its one of great poems I have read today. | Keep writing... | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by afsana | [ Reply to This ] | I enjoyed reading this. Yea i kinda noticed i'm reading your poems backwards sorry. Anyways. This was a good one. It had great imagery and it flowed nicely. I liked how you put i dream in it. I could picture everything. Keep Writing. | ~~Danni~~ | Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ] | Hehehe, I've read this one before. But I think it would have been better if you put "I dream" at the beginning of every stanza instead of the last. | | Posted on 2005-11-13 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ] | i love this poem. I can relate to it because I dream of these things too! keep up the good work! | This is my favorite of yours so far. | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ] | I enjoyed reading this write of yours. Had such a nice flow. I also like the way you repeated "I Dream." Its very good work. You have some talent here. I will look forward to reading more of your writing. Keep up the good work. | God Bless | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ] | I enjoyed this. I like the repetition of the word dream. I can sit here and read this and invision what you are saying, I can see the trees and the mountains and the travels...Nicely done! | | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by beldolore | [ Reply to This ] | I love it! As I was reading it was as if you wrote this for me. All the things you mentioned are things I want to do! I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work. I think I will addd this to my favorites list! | | Posted on 2005-10-14 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ] | |
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