you broke one of the main rules of writing haiku's, which is to paint some sort of image, usually having to do with nature. Good issue though, but do it in another form and expand on it. Haiku's are not this.
What a lovely haiku. Speaks to me of your spiritual quality, found deep within yourself. As when one peers within the deepest self, the id, you find more than one characteristic that is all inclusively belonging to only you, making you unique, and uncommon. This is certainly a magical wonder having this ability to look within. Unfortunately many people are unable to do this, which stunts their growth. I did not find this so with this wonderful haiku poem. This is definitely original, and speaks loudly within the quietly written word. Blessed you are, my friend, may God bless, Yvonne
I read a bunch from this challenge and this one is very lovely. I believe it is the only haiku from this particular challenge and it is very nicely done. You have captured the essence of the magic of two in all of 11 words. I like how you chose to describe this. Very nice job! Take care.
I love this T and once wrote a poem that our own identity is safe inside that of the Divine, there is no worry of losing ourselves. After all we were designed to appear over time, all of us in different scenarios with various talents.
I'm impressed, but the more I read you, the more narcissitic I feel (honestly!) our views are so much alike. peace and love, Nan
beautiful... I really like this one. I like your way of seeing two as something deep like "me inside of you", and how you didn't really speak of duality, which is what most people associate with 2. Your two gave a feeling of oneness, and of the meaning of love. I enjoyed this, hope you keep writing haiku... take care, sb
Love IS magic... and can be shared, given, taken, in so many wonderful ways. I enjoyed your addition to the challenge
[ according to stormyskies the poem and title has to include "the magic" - I included "of two"... hers is "the magic of you...which is a nice poem too"].
Glad you joined in.. this is a lovely haiku.. as is the author.
Eleven little words with a mass of meaning behind each one. Put them all together as you have done and the meaning is eleven-fold. Well done, another insightful write.
Submission Name: The Magic of Two (challenge)
