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    dots Submission Name: Boa (at a winter party)dots
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    Author: VanillaLeaves
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 101/110/23
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBoa (at a winter party)dots
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    Hissing, hanging
    from a wooden peg
    it slithers onto the shoulders,
    feathers biting
    the exposed flesh,
    it coils around the arms.

    Lime Green Feathered Boa

    Constrictor

    who could resist
    the psychedelic embrace
    of sharp neon feathers?

    It clings to the neck,
    or slips gently onto the upper back,
    softlt molting:

    A feather rests on a plush cushion
    or sticks to a black shoe,
    silent love tokens from the jungle.

    Amid the black velvets,
    crowded burgundies,
    and washed out pinks
    of winter dress,
    feathers of green fire
    float in space,
    oval slices of imagination,
    an exotic, unexpected cloud
    trailing behind the Boa

    Constrictor.




    Submitted on 2005-10-14 12:40:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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