this hurts to read.. it really is tragic when someone you thought loved you tells you they really didn't.. you've got to wonder, was i in this all alone? or like you say, "did i imagine this?" it's mind blowing. this is simple and raw. peace, ~Cat
Omfg just give me a name and a location and I will hunt this guy down and hold on let me think of an evil plan...hmmm...well I'll get back to you on that part at least. Ok but yea guys like him are pussys and should rot in hell. But anyways enough of that and more about your write. It was good as far as getting emotions and feelings and thoughts out. It didn't seem to have that great of a rhythm or flow. I'm thinking its cause you didn't have a good rhyme scheme going on in here like you usually do. You can change that if you want but to me this looks like a write where you really don't care what people think as long as they know how you feel cause I do that sometimes too. But anyways I see I have more of your writes to catch up on and read and I will let you know when I think of my evil plan. LOL.
Excellent write and i think everyone or at least i know what you are feeling. It flows beautifully together and i think you did a wonderful job portraying the emotions you are feeling. I just got out of a similar relationship, i wish you the best of luck
I thought this was excellent. Everything about it is right. It has all the ingredients i passion, fire, sadness, anger, imagery and of course great structure and flow. One of the best I have read on this site to date. Hope all works out for you.