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    dots Submission Name: Hai freaking kudots
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    Author: aghori
    ASL Info:    30 M Nv
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 45/56/18
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 198
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 373



    Description:
       My roommate and I have IM conversations totally in haiku. There not always good, but its always fun. I swear by this stuff, its like a poetic vitamin C, if you use it its good for everything. I could go on for days and days...


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    dotsHai freaking kudots
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    My eyes turn within
    Balanced on the edge of time
    I embrace the Void

    Many roads to walk
    If you meet Buddha, kill him
    and live life in peace

    Freezing my ass off
    Am I inside, or outside?
    Ask the thermostat...

    senseous caress
    soft lines and smooth supple hips
    draw me in again




    Submitted on 2005-10-14 18:50:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I 2 like haiku
    and the challenge presented
    when less is now more

    You and your roommate
    enhance your poetic skill
    and master haiku

    Thanks for the skilled and enjoyable read!

    Love,Peace,Joy! tif
    | Posted on 2005-10-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      These haikus (bless u)
    Were enjoyable to read
    Very refreshing

    Loved the second one
    It was quite enjoyable
    And it made me laugh

    The last one I liked
    Just as much as the first one
    All were nice to read

    Challenging structures
    The power in three short lines
    Very thoughtful stuff

    Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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