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    dots Submission Name: The coupling of passion and eroticdots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 380
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 462
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       i could not fit in all the title but it is called THE COUPLING OF PASSION AND EROTIC LUST
    one i came up with last night


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    dotsThe coupling of passion and eroticdots
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    A touch of skin soft and slippery,
    With the hint of hint of sweat.
    We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
    As the wind flowed from the window above us.
    Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
    To abandon all of our uncertainties.
    You began your work on my lips,
    Probing gently as if drawing sex,
    From a deep well of longing and need.
    Then heated tongues met in the midst,
    Of hot and quickening breath.
    And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
    Then intoxicated with those spirits,
    Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
    Piece by piece,
    Until there were no hiding places,
    For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
    Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
    Then skin meshed with skin,
    As the floor became the stage.
    You moved atop of me easily,
    And lowered yourself gently.
    Kissing me as I was filled with you.
    As a gasp broke the kiss,
    Your hands stroked the stray strands,
    Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
    Our slow rhythm gave way,
    To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
    As I arched my body for your comfort,
    And you threw me into ecstasy,
    With the strength of your blows.
    You left me screaming and soaked,
    In oblivion again and again,
    As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
    And our bodies both demanded more,
    Each giving to the other,
    High on the fluids of foreign substance.
    I grasped, then released you,
    Grasped then released you,
    In effort to relieve you of your control.
    The taste of your skin between my lips,
    Was like no other.
    To hear your cry of mercy,
    When my teeth met your warm skin,
    Was more breathtaking than you knew.
    Yet I still released the control to you.
    As you wound your hands in my hair,
    And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
    You moved with one final and breaking blow,
    Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
    Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
    I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
    As you collapsed on top of me,
    Still hot and burning,
    And I glowing like an ember,
    Casting a welcome light,
    Should you seek my gifts again.




    Submitted on 2004-04-19 11:34:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow.the second line confused me tho. definitely better than the other one of yours i read.lol. great imagery,absolutely great.
    | Posted on 2004-05-18 00:00:00 | by shootingstar | [ Reply to This ]
      i am taken back by this in what should be a great memory,eternally gratefull i hope you dopnt mind its addition to my favorites.

    it also had me thinking i should have stayed but where she was going i did not belong
    paulie d
    | Posted on 2004-04-20 00:00:00 | by paulie d | [ Reply to This ]



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