Description: this was totally brought on and inspired by psycho babble-I have been wanting to write a Halloween Poem for a while now but couldn't come up with the big zing-----I think I got it!
Semen For The Children -------------------------------------------
Semen For The Children
The only thing that is worse
than little children,
is little children on October 31st.
What is wrong with society,
is the exact problem that is making me crazy
All I know is the 5th –
You can’t deny insanity
Parents just letting
their children go begging
door to door for candy???
Have you ever tried cyanide lollipops?
Now they come in cherry.
Cherry red like blood
These treats I made.
Be very afraid
of the sweet caramel apples
chock full of razor blades.
This year the whole neighborhood
Is going to taste me.
For in every bite
I added a little semen
Just a little part of me
Happy Halloween friends
This poem is so sickening! YOur come for the children????? Youre a sicko, no offense. I'm glad I dont live near you, or else you'd be in big trouble. I dont have anything to say on this poem, nothing good at all. Except that it provides a negative influence on many of the writers here, and I dont see how anyone can accept this poem. It's just weird! More weird than Michael Jackson rumors! Ugh, you disgust me! No offense, but this is a side of you that I do not want to know. Hopefully, you can show another side of your poetry, like about the world, love, romance, peace. YOu know stuff liek that. I will never forget this poem. One poem that I would rate as just ... sick! lol Take care.
well, when I saw the title of this I wasn't even going to click...and then it was like I couldn't stop myself. I clicked. What can I say? I think I actually saw this penned on the inside of a Hallmark Halloween card just last week, you plagiarist. It would also make for nice commentary during the evening news just before they do their segment on the safety of Halloween. Well, you've made me think twice about sending Savanna out this year...but once again I will give you credit for putting your sick mind out there-with that certain lameman charm. Please promise me you won't put your porchlight on this year.
This is definately different, and oddly really real. Someone in my town last year actually did that to the candy apples, a little squirt in the pot when he made them. Very creappy man. That's all I've got to say about it.
*grins* you are somethin else. I swear. I like it. Its gross, but in a goodway. nice. i love halloween, but im staying in this year. the semen part was priceless. amazing man, a-maz-ing. *shakes head* thanks for the credit in your description. :) the only thing i would change about it is in the beginning, the "door to door" kinda throws off the flow... to me anyways, it kinda made it hard to read. This kinda reminded me of the SAW for some reason. Nicely done ^_^ definately one of your finest!
Okay Okay! the girls and I won't trick or treat your house! sheesh! lol This was really good in your own twisted way. How is it possible that you can take a topic that just throws everyone up in arms, and yet make it so funny and get people laughing? A true talent. Great write, Lt. Traci :)
haha great one, in the spirit of another great writer, i love to see inspiration go from one to another. she has her certain trademark on hers now i see you got yours truly a LTism and original in its own right. i have always viewed your work as unique it just has that flavor (no pun intended of course!) now on this i have been told of in the past about those horrid things that people do to candy, never once thinking anyone could actually do that. it's a shame that hospitals have to offer free x-rays for candy. i laughed at the semen part, i guess now a DNA test too should be offered ha ha. nice one LT,
Oh my! Haha! This is so sick and twisted that is just screams! What a fu cking poem you have written hee hee This is really gross! Very nicely written from a critics perspective. Filled with interesting details and the rhyme is really good mixed in with all this halloween psychotic content! You have given me visuals of some really gross stuff lemme tell ya! And not so much with the razor blades but the semen coated candy just made me say ewwww! So, I gotta say this is disturbing yet excellent because I am sure disturbing psychoticness is what you were going for, and you got it all over this one. Haha! Excellent sick poem here! And thanks for the heads up, I wont ever take candy from you!Take care!