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    dots Submission Name: Freestyle monkey rap #2dots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 595
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    dotsFreestyle monkey rap #2dots
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    I'm an aberrant king, my name is currently irrelevant
    people tell me they want weed cause I'm selling it
    But most ain't my homies, cause they not my friends
    I'm known to hook ninja up, I'm higher than a king pin
    I grauduate next year and I"m'a smioke me pound
    about a year after that ya'll going to see me around
    all up on your tv, and on the radio and shit
    If ya'll don't get my shit then you can fuckin eat a dick

    Fuck Bud light, I"m on the grey goose
    Grey goose get you loose, I rhyme like Dr. sues
    fuck your views, to me they ain't worth
    Killin you over cause I"m the one who drives the hearst/




    Submitted on 2005-10-15 22:31:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is tight. yo why do u call it a monkey rap? do u really sell weed? i'm glad i found another rapper on this site. my brother's always on here. i thought it was just a bunch of poets.
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by young p | [ Reply to This ]
      good job. got bored and just let it loose huh?

    firin AKs at terrorists
    throwing grenades with a battle twist
    still a pacifist
    but i'm packing heat for protection
    walk the blackest streets with no direction
    nothing but deception and lies
    no conception with wives
    drug dealers keep pushing rocks
    bow down [censored]es
    dr shanxx is on top
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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