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Happy


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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i just...okay this just popped into my head yesterday and i thought it was funny or cool. tell me what you think...but please comment.


Happy



Kelly had a diease
Micheal did too
Kelly gave it to John
and John gave it to you
You gave it to Krista
Who gave it to Scott
who gave it to Kyle
I should keep going..NOT
Kyle gave it to Steve
Who gave it to Jerry
who gave it to me
FYI this diease
is not sexually related
actually this is a diease
that is so overrated
This is a diease
that is lovey and sappy
this diease is a thing
called being happy...




Submitted on 2005-10-16 14:22:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, what a good tricky poem! You are looking for this poem to be talking about a god awful sickness filled with pain and whop it turns into something totally glorious and happy. Great write!
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this one. i thought u were talking about aids. u tricked me! that's not fair! good write. i read like four depressing azz poems before i read this one and it made me feel a lot better. thanx.
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really cute but you misspelled a word, you put diease, it's supposed to be disease. Otherwise this is a really cute poem, I too want this disease, I hope to catch it soon! I think we could all use a touch of this "being happy" disease.
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hope this doesn't put a damper on your day but, Disease is spelt wrong and Michael too, but it made me feel happy, just like you.-Mugs-
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]
  This is wonderful. It made me smile and I'm so glade I read it. It is very original. The flow was great and the words fit together perfectly. Nice write.
P.S.
Can pass the disease over here?
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
  I WANT THE DISEASE *CRYS* good poem, continue, and this kinda poem we dont see everyday, first i read onn elite skills, c9ontnue ur fantastic job. ;)

Kev-
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by Wolfeye_666 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is so sweet. it's very original. I would not have thought of it. keep up the good work and stay happy! :)
Much love
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
  This is the best kind of disease anyone can get. In fact, everyone should catch this disease. Very original and very good.
| Posted on 2005-10-16 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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