ooooh someone who shares my desire and passion for coffee... but now im wondering is this poem purely about a caffeine drink that can lift the load of a bad day and provide satisfaction with each touch to your lips or is it about . . . . . .? (had to ask)
such passion over coffee? well done, eventhough I do not have the caffeine craze. who would think such poem can be achieved about a beverage consumed by thousands of people every morning? of course you did and you did a wonderful job.
Wow, I've never seen such passion about such a divine beverage. Coffee is my lifeblood, my soul, my strength. Without coffee I would sleep for eternity. If I only were not at school I would make a pot. :( Then, when I'm off my gaurd, you use depth "waiting to be consumed by one who is not" Thoughtful in a simple poem of joy. Wow.
Hey, this was cute. Had a strong beginning and sort of fizzed off towards the end as far as that "flow and rhyme" stuff goes, but the smiles from the thought made up for that big time. I liked the second stanza too. Coffee...its something worth writing about aint it, HA! Good stuff maynard. Have a good one and keep smilin'
Hee hee! A passionate poem about coffee?! YEAY! I love coffee! Thank god...or someone...Juan Valdez...for coffee! Woo hoo! I couldnt function in the morning without my caffeine fix and nothing does it like coffee does it! Ooooh baby! haha! I dont believe I have ever read a poem about coffee before so two thumbs up just for that fact. Another plus, its a passion poem about coffee...YEAY! Guess you can tell I love the stuff. Cept I dont like it black...gotta have some cream and sugar in there too...YUM! I cannot criticise a poem about this magnificent drink! Think I need a cup now! Thanks for sharing this coffee shop passion! Good stuff! Take care!