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    dots Submission Name: Jellybeansdots
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    Author: dmm
    ASL Info:    50/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 741/888/102
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       I took dr_tiggers' challenge and wrote a 'jellybean' poem


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    dotsJellybeansdots
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    Where the heck are my jellybeans,
    did I leave 'em in my pants?
    Or are they out in the back yard
    under a pile of ants,
    Did momma take them 'fore dinner
    so I wouldn't get too full,
    Or did some stranger steal 'em
    thinkin' they was jewels.
    I promise I won't hurt you if ya
    just give'em back to me,
    Bring me back them beans of jelly,
    they don't grow on trees.




    Submitted on 2005-10-17 18:13:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Gimme back my jellybeans yah.... yah.... yah

    Hahaha... this was a fun read Dan and I enjoy this. Keep up the good work, I had a good laugh with this.

    God bless and have a wonderful Dan.
    | Posted on 2006-05-07 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]
      I love Jellybeans! This was adorable. Nice little jingle to it. I can see a grummy little kid searching high and low for those jellybeans. This was a delight to read.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute, Dan, cute!
    Doc started something with the jellybeans and it seems to be catching on.
    I just read Graeme's version and he says he is hooked, so maybe he is the one who stole yours.
    DJ
    | Posted on 2005-10-21 00:00:00 | by Doris Jean | [ Reply to This ]
      Very cute indeed, Dan. Something you'd find in a children's book for sure.

    Spoken in their language.

    Maybe I'll give this one a try.

    Carol
    | Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Got a chuckle out of this one Dan...
    Tell ya what I will keep my eye open fer ya and maybe those Jellybeans will turn up somewhere soon.
    Enjoyed the read,
    !doc`
    | Posted on 2005-10-18 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha! Nice one Dan, sweet and innocent, exactly like jelly beans!

    A funny little read, reat for kids, and those of us who still think like 'em.

    Bloody excellent!

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-10-17 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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