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    Author: Liminality
    ASL Info:    15/Male/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 8/13/6
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 248
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 962



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       A peom about my relationship with an awesome guy in my life, and how it isn't defined.


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    We met,
    You smiled,
    We talked for a while.

    We sat,
    I watched,
    Then I felt your touch.

    The sun was setting,
    The mood was just right,
    The world around us fell still.

    How could I love you,
    After we had just met,
    When I barely even knew you?

    We sat in silence,
    We didn’t move,
    Then you turned to me.

    We closed our eyes,
    I felt you lips,
    I knew then that you were the one.

    That moment was,
    The best I’ve ever had,
    That time I spent with you that night.

    I live my life today,
    Remembering, wondering,
    If you will ever me mine.

    To hold,
    To love,
    To be with forever.

    I know that it will happen one day or the next
    We will be together,
    And I’ll be in love, and happy because of you.




    Submitted on 2005-10-17 18:22:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ya...I felt this at one time...I guess I still do. The day when you know you love someone..when you know you're supposed to be with them...it's like the first day of your life. And even if that person can't see it..it's just like you said...you know that it's going to happen..and it doesn't even matter when..as long as it does...if you believe...it will. Thanks for bringing back some memories. I hope things work out for you. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem defines the feelings inside...remembering...wondering...this is a excellent work obviously written from the heart about another.
    ~Alan
    | Posted on 2005-10-17 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]



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