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The key

Author: MurphyGirl44
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The key

I found her...I searched for her soul... deep down inside her...buried under years of rubble...I found her soul...She doesn't know...
She does not trust...she is independent...But I know...behind that hard tower of steel...there is someone begging to break free...reach out...attach to another soul...Could It be mine? She is trusting me...talking with me...realizing someone understands...someone listens...another soul caged behind iron bars...but all cages have a key...I have found many...but do I dare to open them?...Yes...and I have...but my key has yet to be found...Will she open mine? ...doubtful...but I will open hers...
Blue beautiful...How many people look into those eyes? Can they see as far into them as I can?...She laughs so easily...we laugh together...laughter eases the pain...So much to learn about her...So much life and so much pain behind those eyes...Can I heal her? ...
I will show her what love is...for one's self...for another...True friendship ...We can face this world together...Helping and supporting...even though there are things one must do alone...I will open my heart to yet another person...I hope maybe this time it will be filled...not broken ...and I do so hope that I will unlock her soul...let it surface...let it breath...and I hope to fill the emptiness I know she has within her heart...

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  I really liked this poem

I too am the kind of person who thinks of others always before myself
The reasoning for this I believe is because as we reach out and help another we also in the same sequence are bieng healed
Great Job with this write

Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think
Thank You
| Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  I am amazed there has been 20 views yet no comments. I loved this work it especially reminds me of much in my do so many of your writings...this is a beautiful write that has been added to my favorites because of its content...seems like someone has found the key to a such a rare thing today...I know a thing or two about empty a empty heart...and pain...
We are not living unless we are experiencing all the emotions of life...this includes pain and hurt...along with the
I really enjoyed this work Kelly, powerful in content with much heart wrote as words...has me in deep thought...
| Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]

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