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    Author: Nagow
    ASL Info:    20/f/Denmark
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 56/70/29
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNowdots
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    At times I want to fall
    into a world of silence
    where the angels crawl
    next to the devils of violence

    At times I want to scream
    let all my fears out
    I can't live in this dream
    I have to shout

    At times I want to be
    float on a mindless sky
    in a world where I'm free
    happiness will make me fly





    Submitted on 2005-10-18 12:38:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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