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    dots Submission Name: Strengthdots

    Author: StevenJay
    ASL Info:    21, Male, Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 27/36/14
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    There are times when tears
    Fall like the waterfalls
    And when the heart cracks
    And crumbles into the ground

    There are times when roses
    Grow through the darkest of nights
    And the coldest of weather
    Only to prick your soul

    There are times when the sun hides
    Behind the darkest of clouds
    And the fog blankets the air
    Filled with the mystery of whatís around the bend

    So often are we hidden
    Blanketed by our fears
    Only to find
    That the fear you feared the most is always lingering overhead

    Donít mask the roses
    Because the thorns can prick
    Fear is only temporary
    And the noise will soon be gone

    Through in silence we hear
    Even when nothing is around
    Because the heart will forever beat
    Through the crashing waterfalls

    Submitted on 2005-10-19 00:56:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can't relate a little on the main thing in this...but that's beauty of it. Nicely done and well written.

    Strength is something hard to write about in a poem and you actually did it. Good job.
    | Posted on 2005-10-19 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]

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