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    dots Submission Name: Motherdots
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    Author: StevenJay
    ASL Info:    21, Male, Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 27/36/14
    Words: 306
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 694
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       People always write about fear, hate, love, but not to many people write about their mother, someone who is special in every single way. It is kinda long but hopefully worth the read, enjoy


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    The anticipation almost makes the wait worth while
    Day after day without seeing your smile is heartbreaking in itself
    A connection still strong throughout the miles that separate me and my mother
    A mind reader who overlooks me through her heart,
    Truly the essence of not only a friend but a soul mate
    My confidence stems from the kindness that she shows
    I am able to do anything because I know that she believes in me
    And will stand by my side through the cloudiest of days,
    For I know that when sheís near the clouds will make way
    For the rainbow that is bound to come,
    When Iím next to one of the most amazing people I have ever met
    I truly feel safe
    I truly feel like I am in the presence of an angel
    For she possesses a special trait that is indescribable
    A trait that can only be possessed by the most special of Godís creations,
    Decisions have been argued in the past
    And my path to where I am today at times has been rocky
    But that path would have taken a drastic turn for the worse
    If I did not have a special navigator there every step of the way,
    I know it might seem like the little things go unnoticed
    But those little things that she does hold a very special place within my heart,
    She has taught me how to live, love, and laugh
    And without her I would not be where I am today,
    Even though I can not always see her
    I know my angel is looking over me wherever she may be
    And I know that she will continue to do so no matter what,
    I am forever grateful and forever in debt to one of the most amazing people alive
    My Mother




    Submitted on 2005-10-19 01:01:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is amazing!!! When i was reading through it didn't seem like a poem you would write about your mom, so i thought the title was misleading. but our family is always our greatest love. Love the poem!
    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by Pri | [ Reply to This ]
      again steven another really great write, my mother just turned 75 today,and though we not near each other we so often talk on the computer,though it isn'[t the same as being able to see her, anyway I found this to be a wonerful poem to all mothers
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      Steven, This is what every Mother longs to hear. Your love for your Mom really shines through. I hope you shared this with your Mom. To get anything like this from my son or daughter, I would treasure more then any gift they could give.
    | Posted on 2005-10-19 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]


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