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    dots Submission Name: Who am I?dots
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    Author: lost and alone
    ASL Info:    19/F/Sandiego,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 159/140/58
    Words: 1048
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWho am I?dots
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    I don't think,
    I will ever understand you.
    And I know,
    you will never understand me.
    We are so alike,
    and yet, so different.
    So why do I,
    feel the need,
    to want your,
    approvial and acceptance?
    I am now, starting to see,
    that just maybe,
    your acceptance and approvial,
    shouldn't mean anything to me.
    I am no longer,
    the child you couldn't raise,
    or the little girl,
    you didn't have time for.
    Nor am I, any longer,
    the young woman,
    who would never be,
    good enough or worthy,
    of your love.
    But instead,
    the spiting image of my father.
    whom you hated.
    and now, what you see.
    is a little bit of him in me.
    But I am not him,
    nor can I be you,
    I am somewhere in between,
    and I guess,
    that means I'm just me.
    A lost little girl,
    a young woman,
    not quite ready for adulthood.
    but getting there slowly.
    My mistakes are many,
    my love is few.
    But I will be somebody,
    wheather or not,
    you choose to love and accept me.




    Submitted on 2005-10-20 10:14:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      parents who try to change their kids into their own spitting image, and expect them to do everything their way. parents should nurture their kids and love them for who they are. this explains why u grew up so fast and part of why u had those hardships in ur life. sorry. i hope things are better now. congrats on the new baby. thought about names?
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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