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    dots Submission Name: What kind of person are you?dots
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    Author: luvy
    ASL Info:    19/F/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 270/168/35
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       listen i know there are a lot of celeberties out there who donate their money to all these chareties but what about those who arent famous but they have cash flowing out there ears. They've gotten so attached to it though that the only way there gonna let it go is if there spending it on themselves. I just got to thinkin about it i dont know why.


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    dotsWhat kind of person are you?dots
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    What gives you the right to judge me?
    Is it because your rich?
    Maybe because everytime you run to daddy he gives you a wad of cash.
    Do you realy think your cash makes you better than me?
    Let me ask you this,
    what do you do with your cash?
    You spend it on
    YOUR cars
    YOUR houses
    YOUR clothes
    Your sittin there watchin your 84 in wide screen when you see it.
    You see the millions struggling just to get food.
    What do you do?
    You go shopping for a new wardrobe
    You may have cash
    but your lacking the most important thing
    a heart.





    Submitted on 2005-10-20 10:37:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a good theme you've picked up on. I like the way that this poem runs like a person telling someone off for their greed. This could have been taken straight from the stage.
    That being said, I'd guess the reason that all of your "you are"s turned into "your"s instead of "you're"s is because of the style of speech. Also, to maintain your style of speech, I'd suggest punctuating on the ends of every line, but that's just me.
    You bring up a good point. I've thought many times just how illogical it is for anyone to have so much money and not do anything with it. Even I feel bad for how little I give away, and I'm certainly in the lower section of the middle class. How much value can you place on mere coins and bills?
    Keep up your writing.
    -The Prince of Tales
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by Prince of Tales | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem! Very classy and well stated! You know, I have found that rich people are the cheapest people out there. People who dont have much money will give you the shirts off there back if you need it. But rich people just cant part with their money unless it is for themselves. They are selfish. People who dont have much have learned what value should be placed on. It is all about friendships and caring for others. The more you have the more you want and the more greedy you become. Money is nothing more than paper, but to the rich, it is everything. Very sad. I love this poem! Very well stated indeed! Take care!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-10-29 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      selfish mutha [censored]as
    neva care about the welfare of others
    they'll sell out their brothers
    for enough cash
    but in the end they're all gonna crash
    right into fate
    and realize God's already closen the gates
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice, and oh so very true.
    I've always wondered what kind of soul those trust fund babies have when they don't have to work for a single thing, and yet always expect more. Hell, even the ones that don't have the trust fund but always expect more yet are unwilling to give a single thing. Great write.
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]
      hey gena! how is my sister today? this is good! and true! like that one gay ass celebrity that has a car for everyday of the week now see thats a waste of insurance gas and money and somebody who is getting abuse and dont got a car could use that to get away see its rich ppl! good job! call me when u get this!
    ~akaila evonne~
    LOVE YA!
    | Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem i really like
    It is so true

    When i think of someone who makes millions of dollars a year i think how in the hell can this person spend all this money in one lifetime
    Dont they realize to give back to those truefully in need will make them richer then they ever truly realized

    Once again a Very good write
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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