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    dots Submission Name: Then, Now, and Soondots
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    Author: lost and alone
    ASL Info:    19/F/Sandiego,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 159/140/58
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThen, Now, and Soondots
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    Life changes in so many ways.
    I can't believe, how fast
    the years have gone by.
    It seems like only yesterday,
    I was coming home from kindergarden,
    drawing pictures of stick figures,
    and writing my first poem.
    And now I'm nineteen, and a mother of two.
    Some part of me,
    still feels like a little girl.
    The other part, feels so old.
    But reality has struck,
    and I am somewhere in the middle.
    There's not much about life, I've enjoyed.
    Although I'm not complaining,
    I may not have gotten a child hood,
    and some say I'm having one now.
    To old to have a child hood.
    But too young to die.
    Having not yet reached,
    the full capacity of life.
    People tell me,
    I have so; much to learn,
    and so much too see.
    But what they don't know,
    is of what I have seen.
    And the things that have been my life.
    I have seen more than most my age,
    And even that of those older than I.
    As the sky darkens, at night,
    I look up and wonder,
    what my future hold,
    I want h happieness and joy.
    Having said that, all I can do
    is sit back and wait,
    to see what tommorrow will bring.




    Submitted on 2005-10-20 10:45:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was good. some people grow up much faster than others becuz of the hardships they have to face at an early age. its cool that u stated this and then said that u have no time for a childhood now since u already lost it. "not willing to live, but not ready to die" good write
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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