This is a really nice poem. How romantic this is! I cant decide who's gift is better. They are both so brilliant and wonderful. To have this kind of love for someone is priceless. To want them to have the greatest gift, the greatest joy, above and beyond your own, is indeed true love. Priceless. This poem is very well written and expressed. So full of love. Beautiful! Take care!
Well I see a description of yin yang in the sky and how it all fits in a microsecond. This feeds, that and now we learn a fantasy of how the sunset gets her colors. For concept I give this one an 11 on a scale of ten.
Love is such a bright weaving of ultratones in skies we see as color, beautiful! peace and love, Nan