thanx for your views
you know using caps saves a bit of time so i was using but now that you adviced i surely will have to use small letters now.
and whats wrong with sinisters
i wrote a poem based on my experience & if you were in my place you would have mentioned something else even more disasterous
*cries* i hate you! it's too damn good! Dude, i almost cried the first time i read it and i did cry this time! if you don't get an A on this ballad then there's gonna be some serious hell to pay.
It's just so perfect, you've kept with the rhyme scheme the whole way through and you're subject (tragic love, revenge) is just amazing! man, talk about tugging on heart strings! this is my favorite part:
"The sword slashed though his chest with a strangled breath Sir. Henry fell. Alec spat on the blood stained corpse and wished it well in hell."
Oh and yes, I do REALLY understand it... shonen-ai! shonen-ai! shonen-ai!
you've done a great job... you should consider writing more of these, and not just for our english class. LOVES!