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    dots Submission Name: must be a saviordots
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    Author: Seedofbayne
    ASL Info:    19/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 55/82/27
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 270
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 973



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       to ashley richardson, a friend, a girlfriend, and a love. all for me...all the above.<3 i will always love you...no matter what comes between us


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    dotsmust be a saviordots
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    I must be a savior
    never tasting flavor
    all the burden upon me
    why can't they just let me be
    I'm scorned to the end
    you can't comprehend

    The sadness I feel is
    is ever so real to
    be making a plea
    of utter insanity

    Don't walk in my shoes,
    you'll be sucked right in too
    to be hurt and to harm
    as you lay in my arms

    a disfugured doll
    waiting for all
    to come by and stare
    at the queen of dispair

    waiting for you
    is all I can do
    you ask for some help
    with a bruise and a welt

    as you called out my name
    I look away with disdain
    my respect for you now
    grown by leaps and bounds

    Not here to complain
    here to help with your shame
    now what to do
    it's all up to you

    <3





    Submitted on 2005-10-20 16:21:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok heres a more worthy comment lol.. thank you so much for always being here for me cuz without u i prbly would go insane u keep me level n im so glad ur in my life.. so much new stuff is happening n well im kinda happy now cuz of ricky.. but i told u all about that last night but i jus wish he wasnt so distant it kinda bothers me cuz ppl usually open up with me cuz i listen.. but i guessss he doesnt or he jus wont but wut ever cuz i dont wna think about that i jus wna b happy n it seems that wen something good happens to me something bad always follows close by... so basically im jus waitn for all of this to come crashing down.. ne day now
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      aw michael i love you so much n im goin to write another comment cuz im wickd blasted n this already means so much to me but the screens wickd bright lol
    | Posted on 2005-10-20 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]



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