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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 1459
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    Bytes: 460



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       Watching the sunrise while drinking coffee on my porch.


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    dancing emotion
    winding its way up
    my heart's breath
    against the morning's dawn

    shadows play
    whispering against
    the rippling grass
    as the darkness fades away

    dreamtime lingers
    as other worlds dance
    across my thoughts
    upon the dew drops falling

    whispering willows
    thoughts fade to wind
    not unlike the dew
    rising to the sun




    Submitted on 2004-04-19 17:58:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was very descriptive.
    These lines:
    dreamtime lingers
    as other worlds dance
    across my thoughts
    upon the dew drops falling
    Remind me slightly of pixies, or faeries. LOL
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by miss__smiles | [ Reply to This ]
      reminds of the mornings
    really good picture
    i can almost smell the air when i read this
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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