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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 513
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 507



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       I dont know what this is, I'm gonna add on to it later


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    so many things got me thinking bout my life/
    like how I live is not enough, was there even a jesus christ/
    I hate to know that I went the wrong direction/
    feel like a girl that's just been raped while showing affection/
    facing facts are difficult, I'm going crazy in guilt/
    I"m like a cold and dead flower and my petal are wilt
    Now its time to take the blame for what it is that I"ve done/
    Everybody go ahead so I'll be the last one/




    Submitted on 2005-10-20 21:02:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi again! (yay! i give first comment!)
    ok, you need a title for this. untitled doesn't do it justice. think of what you were feeling when you wrote this, mebe it could make for an interesting title?
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by sword stalker | [ Reply to This ]


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