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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts on a sunny daydots
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    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    Description:
       Poetry inspired by staring at a cubicle wall for 8 hours a day.


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    dotsThoughts on a sunny daydots
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    My thoughts have wandered
    out the window
    into the clouds
    where my heart, my soul
    are having tea
    with aspirations of what could be..
    and dreams I've had
    are drifting, winking, thinking,
    whistling by.

    Yesterdays songs
    and yesterdays sorrows,
    have filled my sails
    until tomorrow
    when I will greet the day when it begins
    and start this wandering all over again.




    Submitted on 2004-04-19 18:33:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I first found this post in the comic strip Jane's World. My own office is in the basement and contains no phones or computers. So, the only way out is through the door or imagination. The strip is hanging on my door. I relate to this poem.
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by marchhare | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem makes me think.. and kind of hints that you wish you werent at where you are
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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