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Life -------------------------------------------
Chaos...
is here.
Life, death arent that important...
...anymore.
Its here.
And Im not...
i think ur short poems have more power than some of the long ones but the long ones have a lot more imagery! i dunno! its a win win situation u have! i think u have an amazing talent and i think overtime it is goin to flourish even bigger! good job! ~akaila~
it is a little short, but still quite powerful. sometimes you can say alot without using alot of useless words. i found that this was really raw and simple, but it was well written. i liked it.
Submission Name: Life
