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The seen and the not... -------------------------------------------
Twisted and turned,
spinned all the way.
Riddles took over,
and the mysteries remains...
...unsolved.
Open...
...and without a closure.
Twisted and turned,
a puzzle is prepared.
hey i like this one! another fav! the imagery was amazing! life can be so weird sometimes! it would be a lot easier if doors dont always have to close unexpectadly! good job! ~akaila~
Aaaahhhh One door closes and another opens one puzzle is completed and another begins so is ife. Life is a mystery if we had the aswers to lifes greatest mysteries than there wouldn't be any point in living. As for the poem its good. Seems to imply that no mystery is ever truly solved and that life is retoracle. I like the tone its dark but not over powering. I do agree with Stormrider I would use something other than spinned doesn't seem to fit very will.
Submission Name: The seen and the not...
