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    dots Submission Name: Diamond Cuttersdots
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    Author: SouthrnQT
    ASL Info:    24/ Female/ Florida
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 290/271/31
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 997
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 670



    Description:
       After a few people tellling me to post this (which it was initially a joke between myself and Tina aka:Brownsdelight) Here it is, in all it's glory...this is meant for humor...if you don't get it, I guess you had to be there...lol.


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    dotsDiamond Cuttersdots
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    Nipples that swell, frozen they stand
    Be careful don't touch, they may cut your hand
    I know they look sexy, but really it's not
    They're screaming for covers, 'Please get me hot!'
    What's with the cold temps in the office today?
    I'm tempted to leave, for my nipples I'll pray
    A sweater, a jacket, a heater sounds nice
    Even a moist, wet tongue would suffice.
    Sometimes I wonder why the torture remains
    Yet here I am working, my nipples so strained.
    I'm begging and pleading for help to arrive
    Soon my nipples will poke out someone's eyes!




    Submitted on 2005-10-21 13:17:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is too funny.
    What a great and fitting title.
    The flow and rhyme work well, and it's just plain funny. I had a door to door job once, and we were out on a cold fall night. Long story short, I had a similar experience.
    Very nICE work!
    Nicely
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      lmao...I so know how this goes. I really don't know what to say about this one, but I really couldn't pass it up. It can be quite the situation when one gets cold and you can't do anything to hide it without being too obvious. You gotta love our very own built in thermometers!

    Candi
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahahaha. I love it. You did a brilliant job with this one. It reminds me of when I get cold and how embarassing that can be.

    You are hilarious. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by Sweet as Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
      fantastic and perfect as always...and the poem is good too ;) yeah, your ever-inspiring and always amazing words put a smile on my face again :)

    professional nipple warmer,
    me
    | Posted on 2005-10-21 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]


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