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Submission Name: I am death dots

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Author:	roxygirl239
ASL Info:	14/f/VA
Elite Ratio:	3.39 - 450/305/44
Words:	87

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	596
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	676

Description:
Title says it all. I'm feeling kinda "dark" today. lol. This ones mad freaky.

I am death dots

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I am the whisper
Of the catacombs
I will call
For you
Eventually

I need
My company
Remember though
One visit lasts forever

I long for
Your dark crimson
The sweet taste
Almost dwelling
On my cold lips

I feed
On your soul
So I can
Dominate
Your body

You may
Still run
You may
Still hide
But I will catch up
I lurk in the shadows

I am
Everyone's
Everything's
Deepest
Darkest
Fear
I am death
You will die

Submitted on 2004-04-19 19:08:01 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  This is an excellent piece of death, Are you to say you could almost tatste death's presence on a past experience?you seemed to be very familiar with the symptoms that come with his presence, how sweet.I look forward to reading more of your poetry.-vlad09
| Posted on 2004-10-01 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
  hey this was a good one
normaly i would tell you to make the lines longer but in this case the one or two word lines spoke for themselves
| Posted on 2004-07-21 00:00:00 | by locke | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem is disturbing, but it's good. only one thing: I would get rid of the last line. it isn't needed in my opinion.
| Posted on 2004-04-20 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
  WOW. This poem was wonderful. the short lines kept a mysterious feel to the poem, and the well chosen words added to the entire tone. I loved the end. Nice work
| Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by shatteringshadow | [ Reply to This ]
  this is really cool, i'm reading this book (Wizard of the Grove by Tanya Huff) and this reminded me of Lord Death in the book, this is really really good i specially like the I feed
On your soul
So I can
Cominate
Your body
That stanza but should cominate be contaminate i don't know though i could just be crazy thanks a million for sharing
~*~Pryncess
| Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
  i like your style. very unique. i love this poem, but you need to write positive more. i havent read all your poems so i cant say much, but this poem is awseome. listen to some collective soul or some bob marley or eric clapton or blind melon... that will get you in a good mood. i promise. jst some positive music. ROCK ON MY SISTA!!!
| Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by melancholypoet | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good, I love all dark, scary, vampire, monster, ghoul, what not, I love the blood stuff the most, lol. this is good your word choice is awesome!
| Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
  this is a good dark write, i love the morbid style...death comes to us all. i wrote a quadruple haiku on the reaper a few days ago...
the reaper is everywhere...keep death coming.
| Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]

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