This is an excellent piece of death, Are you to say you could almost tatste death's presence on a past experience?you seemed to be very familiar with the symptoms that come with his presence, how sweet.I look forward to reading more of your poetry.-vlad09
WOW. This poem was wonderful. the short lines kept a mysterious feel to the poem, and the well chosen words added to the entire tone. I loved the end. Nice work
this is really cool, i'm reading this book (Wizard of the Grove by Tanya Huff) and this reminded me of Lord Death in the book, this is really really good i specially like the I feed On your soul So I can Cominate Your body That stanza but should cominate be contaminate i don't know though i could just be crazy thanks a million for sharing ~*~Pryncess
i like your style. very unique. i love this poem, but you need to write positive more. i havent read all your poems so i cant say much, but this poem is awseome. listen to some collective soul or some bob marley or eric clapton or blind melon... that will get you in a good mood. i promise. jst some positive music. ROCK ON MY SISTA!!!
this is good, I love all dark, scary, vampire, monster, ghoul, what not, I love the blood stuff the most, lol. this is good your word choice is awesome!
this is a good dark write, i love the morbid style...death comes to us all. i wrote a quadruple haiku on the reaper a few days ago... the reaper is everywhere...keep death coming.
Submission Name: I am death
