this is my life

Author: sickly Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545 /537 /203 Words: 79

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this is my life

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loving laughing crying it never ends why regret anything? just see things through there were some good things and there was horror my fill my share why be shy about it? that's what being a man is all about this is my life and don't you forget about it loving memories about real things and a depth of hatred like no other trying to make something of it all everything does matter still there's no pretending to be done

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