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    dots Submission Name: this is my lifedots
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    Author: sickly
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    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthis is my lifedots
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    loving
    laughing
    crying
    it never ends
    why regret anything?
    just see things through
    there were some good things
    and there was horror
    my fill
    my share
    why be shy about it?
    that's what being a man is all about
    this is my life
    and don't you forget about it
    loving memories about real things
    and a depth of hatred like no other
    trying to make something of it all
    everything does matter
    still
    there's no pretending to be done




    Submitted on 2005-10-21 14:52:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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