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    dots Submission Name: Sierra Nevada Saturdaydots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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       Driving home from Tahoe last weekend. Such a wonderful time of year!

    Happy Day and Weekend!

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    dotsSierra Nevada Saturdaydots

    The darkened clouds
    cast shadows
    across the granite

    The sun has become
    the autumnal trees

    The ancient faces
    weathered rock
    of the flame

    Seasonal observer

    Submitted on 2005-10-21 14:54:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HEE the two words that touched home here was " ablaze and flame ". We are in the midst of a very dry summer our fire fighters are working four or five large fires at this time. Millions of dollars worth of homes, personel belongings and businesses have been turned to ash.
    A good poem otherwise. LOL.
    | Posted on 2011-06-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      This proves a writing doesn't have to have so many words. Such a short poem that says so much about a beautiful autumn. I love the mornings in fall, when I'm up before dawn and watching the sun rise over such pretty colors that autumn brings with her.
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Again I love this.
    The only way I get to see life out west The oceans the sunsets the trees and breeze is from your poetry.

    You have always put them vivid images into my head and I long for the day I see them in person.

    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      Another little gem from you. Very descriptive and your choice of words were very apt and painted quite a picture. Autumn is such a special time of year.
    | Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      you already know that i have gone through some of your work in the past..and this piece seems to be complementing the 'style' that you have set ie to say the world is a few words. excellent description of the seasons and how we watch them.. i liked it!
    | Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by jassal | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, this is probably the best poem I've read out of all the "haiku-ish" poems. Shows a lot of meaning and color in very few words.
    | Posted on 2005-10-21 00:00:00 | by Atropos | [ Reply to This ]
      articulate for sure (especially for such a short piece). your use of powerful adjectives really added some substantial prowess to this piece
    | Posted on 2005-10-21 00:00:00 | by The Minister | [ Reply to This ]

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