HEE the two words that touched home here was " ablaze and flame ". We are in the midst of a very dry summer our fire fighters are working four or five large fires at this time. Millions of dollars worth of homes, personel belongings and businesses have been turned to ash.
A good poem otherwise. LOL.
This proves a writing doesn't have to have so many words. Such a short poem that says so much about a beautiful autumn. I love the mornings in fall, when I'm up before dawn and watching the sun rise over such pretty colors that autumn brings with her.
you already know that i have gone through some of your work in the past..and this piece seems to be complementing the 'style' that you have set ie to say the world is a few words. excellent description of the seasons and how we watch them.. i liked it!