Description: I wrote this right after i got dumped i dunno u tell me
The Pain -------------------------------------------
My heart has betrayed me
for the last time.
I dont think I can
trust it ever again.
NEVER AGAIN WILL
YOU LEAD ME ASTRAY
I cast you out of my body
and pray to all of the devine
powers that you will never
find me or come crawling
back to me.
The things you allowed me to do
The temptations you lead me through
are far worse than ever before
I cannot go through this pain anymore
I like the meaning you are trying to convey through this piece, but i always think all of us as artists can find room to improve, but imperfection is what gives many works of art charactor.